Tuesday, December 15, 2009

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When will we walk hand-in-hand?
Your absence gives me a pain that I cannot withstand...

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- Dimple

8 comments:

Alexandra Garland said...

Hi Dimple,
You captured "love" so beautifully!!
Love is such a big part of our existence... it brings us pleasure and also pain... How to cope with it ia a lesson for the lifetime.
I always look forward to read your two-liners!
Take care!!
-Alex

श्याम कोरी 'उदय' said...

... nice !!!

Anonymous said...

Keep going dear u havent posted for so long.....
If not 2-liner, atleast post a line or two of some song......

विजयप्रकाश said...

very nice... an innocent question
with a pinch of feelings

lakshmi said...

just in two lines you explain/express so beautifully...thanks to Shravan's invite to this blog....

MUFLIS said...

nice write....
brief,,
but impressive .

kshama said...

Oh! Each one is superb!
Can you remove word verification? Its easier to leave comments!

KALAAM-E-CHAUHAN said...

love is the term which has no boundary, it's our definition only what we can feel about that and say whatever we want to be termed as....

any way nice thoughts ........

mohtarma

you started writing out of leak as our contemporary shayars want to ....

start wrting in urdu also

but you have to be very careful on the rhyming pattern once you get in to Urdu .......

mubarak ......keep it up ..

some time visit at kalaam-e-chauhan.blogspot.com